Wednesday, July 10, 2013

Rain Didn't Stop People to Come to Minnetrista

4th of July Fireworks at Minnetrista Cultural Centetr


MUNCIE, Indiana--Hundreds of people came to Minnetrista on July, 4th 2013 to celebrate America Independence Day watching fireworks decorated the night sky of Muncie. Rain before the celebration didn't stop them to come there with their family.

This summer was a bit different. "Last year was much hotter than this year. This year is rain almost everyday" said Amber Widener, one of people that come to Minnetrista.

Actually Widener was not originally from Muncie. She, with her son Aidan Widener, was from Pendleton. They came to Minnetrista just for seeing the fireworks blew up celebrating the Independence Day.

"I heard that fireworks here is great so that we wanna see that," said Widener. She told that she always move to see different fireworks from different places every year. She wanted her son to feel fireworks show from different places. Aidan also very enjoyed waiting for the show.

Independence day is very important for every country, so is for United States. People celebrate it by various way. This fireworks show was one of the ways to celebrate 4th of July.

Fred Myrick, one of Fireworks show visitor, saw the independence day celebration as a time when family could gather together spending their time which couldn't be done in another days.

"In independence country we get our own constitution, we are free to make decision as a nation and as a small community as well. And we can contribute by our own way for communities for America. For me, its an honor to serve people who died for this country and (gave) their live. It is time for commemorate," said Myrick.

In this celebration, Amber, as well as Aidan, who still in elementary school hope for the better of America. Their hope probably is the same hope as millions of other US citizens wherever they are. People who lived in this country loved this country very much. They wanna see improvement towards better America in the future.

1 comment:

  1. Well done, Nurul! You might add another sentence in your first paragraph that more clearly defines your angle, which appears to be to show myriad reasons why people celebrate the holiday.

    Also: You might separate the direct quotes in the second paragraph that come from two different people. Keep the first one in that paragraph and move the other to its own paragraph.

    Alternatively, you could push that quote from Myrick to later in the story.

    -Adam

    ReplyDelete